The outline of cause and effect essay
Topic: population growth
Type: one cause and several effects
Thesis statement: the population growth has caused a series of serious problems.
Topic sentence 1: the population growth has caused issues to the environment.
Supporting details:
1. More pollution produced by people are discharged to the environment
2. To meet the residences of more people, more land will be used to built buildings instead of landscaping, which is bad to the environment
3. More people need more resources which are very limited in the earth. Our larger demand to the nature will definitely broke the order of nature which really does harm to the environment.
Topic sentence 2: the growth of population also affects the economy.
Supporting details:
1. More population will result in the situation that supply falls short of demand which has a potential of becoming into inflation.
2. The government will spend more expenditure to satisfy the residents’ basic living demands instead of put money in capital goods.
Topic sentence 3: the growth of population is a factor that leads the problems of our society
Supporting details:
1. More population leading the society tends to be a unstable one.
2. More population causes more unemployment
3. More population causes poverty.
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Hi Xin, I'd like you to work on the C&E topic. Since you focus on the effects of the population growth, the thesis statement should have three different effects of the growth of population. Also, the 3rd topic sentence seems to be vague, so be more specific about the problems of our society.
ReplyDeleteIf you talk about the poverty issue, that would be related to the economy that you've already mentioned in the 2nd body. Do more brainstorming before you write on this topic. I'm looking forward to reading your paper. :)